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The Queen - Prologue_Teaser

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The Queen

Once upon a time, there was a beautiful young girl whose stepmother always made her stay home with the baby. And the baby was a spoiled child, and wanted everything to himself, and the young girl was practically a slave. But what no one knew is that the king of the goblins had fallen in love with the the girl, and he had given her certain powers. So one night, when the baby had be particularly cruel to her, she called on the goblins for help!

"Say the right words," the goblins said, "and we'll take the baby to the castle, and you will be free!" But the girl knew, that the Goblin King would keep the baby in his castle for ever and ever and ever, and turn it into a goblin! And so the girl suffered in silence. Until one day, when she was tired from a day of housework, and she was hurt by the harsh words of her stepmother, and she could no longer stand it... She said the words! “Goblin King! Goblin King! Wherever you may be take this child of mine far away from me!” She said, and the goblins granted her request, taking the child to the castle, beyond the Goblin City.

Soon, the young girl regretted her words, and begged for the Goblin King to give her back her baby brother. “What's said is said.” The Goblin King said, but since he still loved the girl so very much, he gave her the chance to run his Labyrinth to get her baby brother back. “You have thirteen hours” He said.

The girl ran the Labyrinth, and through dangers untold and hardships unnumbered, she fought her way to the castle beyond the Goblin City, to take back the child that the goblins had stolen from her. The King offered her treasures and love and her dreams, and sent her illusions to distract her from her goal, but her will was as strong as his, and her kingdom as great. He had no power over her.

So the young girl retrieved her baby brother and returned home, in hopes that the King would never bother her again. However, the King still loved her very much, so he decided to wait patiently, until the girl was old enough to understand what he was offering her... He would watch her from afar and guard her from any danger, until the day he would once again appear in front of her and offer her his heart once again...

Yes, the King waited...
The prologue/teaser for ANOTHER fanfiction I have in mind, this time a Labyrinth one =D

Tell me what you think about it! n.n
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Jareth in a way is like a creepy stalker but u gotta love him. anyways LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!